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4 Comments 23 February 2010

Jazmin Zepeda
3333 —— ——
Palmdale, CA 93550
Phone: (—)——-
Alt: (—)——-
JazminZepeda@Gmail.com
SUMMARY:
Career objective: Personal Financial Representative (bilingual)
Highly energetic, ability to solve complex problems, a dynamic team player,
exceptional interpersonal skills, commitment to excellence. I would like to apply my knowledge and skills in a manner that will enhance the work environment of which I will be a part.
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:
June 2009
to Del Taco Corporation Palmdale, CA
2010 Team Member
I do my part in a team to provide fast but excellent customer service all while raising sales.
September 2008 Last Resource Law Offices Palmdale, CA
to Marketing Representative
January 2009
Implementing sales skills, account management skills, and promotional ideas.
December 2005 H&E Corporation Palmdale, CA
to Head Cashier/Floor Manager
September 2007
Supervised the work of cashiers on duty.
-Assisted managers with cash pulls of excess cash from registers.
-Managed Customer Service Desk, helping customers with an array
of questions and problems including opening credit accounts, placing special
orders, and discussing financial aspects of their purchases.
ACCOMPLISHMENTS:
Scored 100% in Customer Service Secret Shopper Evaluations.
EDUCATION:
2012 Antelope Valley College Lancaster, CA
Major: Registered Nursing, GPA: 3.0

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4 Comments so far

  1. nutella- says:

    Your resume is pretty good, but it needs a little improvement.
    - For all your job details you need to have the same sentence format. For example,for your 2005 job, you used past and passive sentences (assisted .., supervised…, managed…), use that same format for your other jobs.
    - Put in 1-2 more job responsibilities for your two latest employment.
    - Make a new section called “Skills” for you to emphasize your technical and interpersonal skills.
    - Make a new section called “Language and Activities” for your language fluency and leadership activities you did in college or outside work.
    Good luck!

  2. Rick says:

    It’s not a bad start. In your summary, keep it focused on the job you’re applying for and what the employer wants rather than what YOU want. Also, get rid of very subjective terms like “highly energetic” and “commitment to excellence.” Companies aren’t interested in hiring anyone who’s not either. More help in the links below.

  3. Don't Mine Me says:

    It looks ok, but you have to be careful on what you put on your resume. You have to be truthful, especially in writing.
    There is no such thing as major in Registered Nursing. You either major in AS in Nursing or BS in Nursing. Registered Nurse is a license. This might lead employer to believe you have the Registered Nurse License and can be a ground for termination.
    I think you need more information in your job experience. One sentence doesn’t really help.
    Your phone number and your address cannot be —-, you have to put your real information.

  4. xokissth says:

    this sounds good but i think nutella-girl has the right idea. just need to tweak a few little things.


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